Post by ella on Mar 16, 2011 10:47:55 GMT -5
Totally switching gears now, but writing up this little series has been on my to-do list for a while. Will hopefully get back to the Royal Guide project for the next assignment.
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“Honey and Boomer” is a concept for an early reader series. Honey is a sweet, yet impulsive little girl. Boomer is her loyal, if sometimes skeptical, companion. Together, they make adventures out of everyday life.
Honey and Boomer in Cookie Time: Boomer promised Honey they would bake cookies this afternoon. Only problem is, there are not enough eggs. Or any chocolate. Honey and Boomer find their way out of each bind, only to burn the cookies in the end. That’s no problem, though. There’s always ice cream!
Honey and Boomer in Pool Time: Honey is heading to the pool today. But first, she has to put her swimsuit on… the right way. And she has to go potty. And have a snack. And digest from said snack. By the time Honey is ready to go swimming, an afternoon shower ruins the day. To Boomer’s horror, Honey has a solution: they’ll come back the next day.
Honey and Boomer in The Birthday Cake Caper: Honey can’t wait to have some leftover birthday cake. But she is aghast to find that the beautiful frosting is missing. As Honey and Boomer hunt for clues, everybody becomes a suspect. That is, until Gram points out that Honey had accidently smooched the frosting the day before.
Honey and Boomer in the Mystery of the Cave: When Honey has to go potty, she and Boomer get separated from their group on a visit to some caves. That won’t stop them from having a good time. But… what are those spooky sounds? When Honey and Boomer run to escape the ghost, they crash into their family, who had been just up ahead. The ghostly voices were just echoes caused by the cave.
Honey and Boomer in The Case of the Dancing Dragon: Honey’s dance class is interrupted by a mysterious sound. It must be the air conditioning, decides the dance teacher. But that’s no air condition. In fact, it must be a dragon! Honey’s dance class gets crazier and crazier as the students get more worried, only to find out in the end that it is just a construction crew next door making the noise.
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If I may dissect my own work, what pops out here is that the first two stories seem to have very different feel from the last three stories, which are more “mysterious.” The frustrating thing is that Honey and Boomer have very strong, clear personalities and patterns of thought, which is what ties all the books in the series together, but I’m not sure that comes through. Also, the books all start the same way, with Honey being excited about something (cookies, dance class) and having to drag Boomer out of bed. Thoughts? Suggestions?
Also, I picture Honey as a little girl and Boomer as an anthropomorphic dog, but I never spell it out because what they look like/are isn’t important to the plot… but is it confusing to be vague or was it not a problem?
Thanks!
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“Honey and Boomer” is a concept for an early reader series. Honey is a sweet, yet impulsive little girl. Boomer is her loyal, if sometimes skeptical, companion. Together, they make adventures out of everyday life.
Honey and Boomer in Cookie Time: Boomer promised Honey they would bake cookies this afternoon. Only problem is, there are not enough eggs. Or any chocolate. Honey and Boomer find their way out of each bind, only to burn the cookies in the end. That’s no problem, though. There’s always ice cream!
Honey and Boomer in Pool Time: Honey is heading to the pool today. But first, she has to put her swimsuit on… the right way. And she has to go potty. And have a snack. And digest from said snack. By the time Honey is ready to go swimming, an afternoon shower ruins the day. To Boomer’s horror, Honey has a solution: they’ll come back the next day.
Honey and Boomer in The Birthday Cake Caper: Honey can’t wait to have some leftover birthday cake. But she is aghast to find that the beautiful frosting is missing. As Honey and Boomer hunt for clues, everybody becomes a suspect. That is, until Gram points out that Honey had accidently smooched the frosting the day before.
Honey and Boomer in the Mystery of the Cave: When Honey has to go potty, she and Boomer get separated from their group on a visit to some caves. That won’t stop them from having a good time. But… what are those spooky sounds? When Honey and Boomer run to escape the ghost, they crash into their family, who had been just up ahead. The ghostly voices were just echoes caused by the cave.
Honey and Boomer in The Case of the Dancing Dragon: Honey’s dance class is interrupted by a mysterious sound. It must be the air conditioning, decides the dance teacher. But that’s no air condition. In fact, it must be a dragon! Honey’s dance class gets crazier and crazier as the students get more worried, only to find out in the end that it is just a construction crew next door making the noise.
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If I may dissect my own work, what pops out here is that the first two stories seem to have very different feel from the last three stories, which are more “mysterious.” The frustrating thing is that Honey and Boomer have very strong, clear personalities and patterns of thought, which is what ties all the books in the series together, but I’m not sure that comes through. Also, the books all start the same way, with Honey being excited about something (cookies, dance class) and having to drag Boomer out of bed. Thoughts? Suggestions?
Also, I picture Honey as a little girl and Boomer as an anthropomorphic dog, but I never spell it out because what they look like/are isn’t important to the plot… but is it confusing to be vague or was it not a problem?
Thanks!